This is what I'm talking about when I say fanfic is Art (http://mecurtin.livejournal.com/428179.html). I *love* OT4 AUs.
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formatting nit:
It's better if you use a double carriage return between each paragraph, so the reader's eye can separate them. That may mean having *** or some such where you now have double carriage returns.