Oh, I like this structure. Very clever! It draws your attention less to the act itself and more to the emotions and the complexity of the relationships that surround it. Very nice! Thank you so much for sharing!

And, as long as we're on the recommendation bandwagon here, one of my favourite OT3 writers is DameRuth (http://www.whofic.com/viewuser.php?uid=2528) and aerotica (http://www.whofic.com/viewuser.php?uid=2741) does a lovely OT3 as well.

Enjoy the rec's and I look forward to seeing more from you in the future!