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Here, everybody, have a stream-of-consciousness PWP. Unbetaed. Happy Monday?

Story: Counting to Nine
Author:

sapote3
Rated: NC17
Pairing: Nine/Jack/Rose

One was the shirt that she dropped on the ground, purple polyester - she was used to using the TARDIS as her personal clothesline - as she backed away across the decking to the alcove where he slept. Her skin was creamy white, and he looked up at her and thought human.

Two were the sets of hands on her, Jack's ridiculous tender open palms against her square ribcage, against the pink upward swells of her breasts, and the Doctor's hands went still on her back as he watched Jack's mouth whisper silent words into the curves of her side. Jack was more careful than he expected; easy, competant. Jack looked up at him, eyes dark, and -

Three was the way their mouths met, the slow drag of lips, his mouth against Rose's temple, the way her breath caught as Jack's mouth opened against hers, as he turned to the Doctor and -

Four was the number of hearts beating in the bed when the Doctor slid inside her, Jack's hands stroking up his sides and down between them, his own breath a sobbing in his ears, and he met met Rose's eyes and -

Five was the slow count under his breath, the careful thrust because it had been so long since he'd done this, and her breasts were soft and heavy against his chest, and Jack kissed her hard, ran his hands up the Doctor's back, his erection rubbing into her thigh, into the movement of their legs as she wrapped around him -

Six rising gasps, her face pinching with concentration, with immediacy, and she threw back the pale curve of her throat and tightened around him, unlikely and present and there with him, with both of them, and Jack's fingers paused and moved again between them and she turned her face into Jack's shoulder and laughed, coming hard around him.

Seven bolts held the bed in place, and he heard each of them squeak under the strain, his arms barely holding him up in the slick slide and scent and press of Rose's ankles crossed up around his shoulderblades and - there, and Jack's hand is on the back of his neck, somehow, when he comes.

Eight strokes of his hand, with Rose pillowed up against him dazed and gleaming, with his breath still catching in his lungs. Jack was braced up over him, eyes squeezed shut, and he twisted his wrist and watched Jack's face tense and his shoulders stutter as he spurted into the Doctor's hand.

Nine long breaths until they fell asleep, the two of them, curled up around the Doctor as the TARDIS spun through space, and he watched them with bemused eyes, and kept count.

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This was lovely, and I completely agree with dark_aegis above about the emotions coming through very strongly. Also second the rec that wendymr made for Fayhe's "Suture" (and everyone else's recs as well).

Since everyone's doing recs I might as well jump in as well :)

FUZZY by

wired_lizard (Jack/Rose, 9) - NC-17 for smut - This one's more Jack/Rose, but their "interaction" (ahem!) has everything to do with the Doctor, plus a really original take on telepathy. This is also supposed to be a prequel for 9/Rose/Jack story still to be written (hopefully she'll write it).
http://community.livejournal.com/dwfiction/479682.html

HANA-MI by

aervir (9/Rose/Jack) - PG-13 - The cherry blossoms are in bloom in Japan; lovely little slice of life (takes place between "Boomtown" and "Bad Wolf")
http://community.livejournal.com/time_and_chips/1431182.html

"Something Like Moebius" by

doyle_sb4 - G - The author's summary is best: Eleven-year-old Jack has your typical possessed-alien-teacher experience (also contains an adult Jack, Rose and the Doctor- not OT3 in the strictest sense, but who can resist eleven-year old Jack?)
http://doyle-sb4.livejournal.com/390405.html

"They Danced" by taleya - NC-17 - 9/Rose/Jack smut - hot! Mostly PWP, but it's very well written. This one's a classic:
http://homepages.ihug.com.au/~taleya/dw/dance.html

"Slightly Psychic Confessions" by Casira - NC-17 - 9/Rose/Jack - Another incredibly hot PWP that makes very original use of psychic paper. Another early classic!
http://www.whofic.com/viewstory.php?sid=3273&warning=NC-17

"Acceptance and Loss" by

ponygirl72 - PG13 - 9, Rose, Jack friendship - This is another one of those stories that does a wonderful job of showing the growing friendship between Jack, Rose and the Doctor. It's also got an excellent action/adventure plot, and the hospital scene between Jack and the Doctor just kills me every time I read it. Be sure to check out the sequel.
http://www.whofic.com/viewstory.php?sid=5468

ACTS OF NECESSITY by

aeshna_uk (Jack/Rose, 9th Doctor) - NC17 - Pretty much a hurt/comfort type of sex story, but really impressive for the excellent characterization of all the principles. Even though the Doctor doesn't get any horizontal action, I loved the characterization of him in this story, where driven by his inner demons, he can't help but hurt those around him.
http://aeshna-uk.livejournal.com/2173.html

FIVE TIMES JACK THOUGHT BETTER OF IT by

lightgetsin - (9/Rose/Jack) - PG-13 - Lovely Jack POV observations starting in "The Empty Child" and ending post-Satellite 5.
http://lightgetsin.livejournal.com/241488.html
(also check out other stories by lightgetsin, he/she has also done some really good smutty OT3s as well)

wendymr's done lots of great OT3 stories, but I think this is my favorite one:
FINDING JUDAS by

wendymr - (10/Jack, 10/Rose) - Mostly PG-13 but with a couple of very R parts - Probably my favorite reunion fic that proves the old adage that you can't go home again.
http://www.whofic.com/viewstory.php?sid=8907
(be sure to check out the sequels!)

Oh, wow. This is awesome. Thank you! I have read exactly one of these before, I am going to enjoy getting through this list.

And thank you for the feedback! I appreciate it.